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THE SCREENPLAY
Early Story Notes Mechanics of the "Dayglass" Universe
The First Draft The
most interesting scene that was eventually removed from the
"Dayglass" screenplay also happened to be part of
the very first draft we wrote. In the earliest of drafts, Chair
Man did not follow Hero up the beach. Ophelia had also not yet
been written in to help Hero get past his inner demons. So,
Hero was left all by himself to reach the hourglass and find
the door home. Instead of an endless stairway, there was a landbridge
that connected the beach to the hourglass. More details about
the landbridge can be found above, in the "Mechanics..."
document.
The Final Draft The
screenplay is still technically not finished, since we're going
to be re-writing the scenes that we haven't shot yet. But if
you're interested, you can read the 14th draft of the screenplay,
exactly the way it was on March 22nd, 2007.
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